The Art of Procrastination

I’ve been in a writing abyss for the past 2 months. Any and every word is taking four times the effort to write and I catch myself wondering if the there is a point to the self-inflicted suffering.

It’s the holidays, my day job is overbooked crazy and there are a million other things to take care of at home including folding and putting away 10,000 loads of laundry.

So, it’s time to find my motivation. If I were a method actor, I’d dig deep into the character’s psyche for that lost nugget of hope. So far I haven’t found it. Here’s where I’ve looked:

Read a sample.

  • Scrabble for iPad (I’ve now won more than 50% of the games played #inyourfacecomputer! )
  • Neverland (SyFy miniseries)
  • Tossing Runes at façade.com until they say what I want to hear
  • Audible books (47 hours of Connie WillisBlackout and All Clear)

Being a writer means I have special powers when it comes to creating distractions. Now I have to AIS (Ass In Seat) and get the last chapters tweaked and sent to my editor. Then—and only then—I can relax and enjoy the eggnog.  Granted, I still have a gingerbread house that needs decorating and presents to wrap and 5 pounds of shrimp to pickle, and….and…and…

I never have writer’s block, just procrastination pains. How do you deal with the urge to do nothing?

I’m trying to focus on the prize at the end of the work… being published.


Magically Mundane

In my professional life, I have to focus on message and concision and visuals while usually constrained to 30 seconds.  Yes, I produce those dreaded commercials:)

However, it does lend resources to my writing life.  I’ve learned there is only one best word for each use and it has to be active, visual and interesting. It has to help move my message–my story–forward.

The process takes me back to a high school art class where we were instructed to create art that makes the ordinary interesting and makes the viewer see the content in a new way, guiding their eye to what you want them to notice.

Writing is the same.  We want our readers to see what’s special about our characters and care.  They don’t want a caricature of the same people they see everyday.  They want details and new angles.

When I’m shooting video, I look for unusual ways to frame the shot or change the height from how we would normally see the scene. In my current novel, I have multiple viewpoints looking at the same subject: art theft. Each character is developed not only by their words and actions in their perspective viewpoints, but also by the observations and opinions of other characters.

I like to give my characters limitations either physical or mental which they have to overcome.  I love characters who are clever and notice the details in an ordinary scene that gives them the advantage.  I love love love characters that surprise me.

Case in point: as I’m re-writing the last chapters of WIRED, my sister, and first beta reader guessed who I planned to kill off.  Guess what?  Now he lives!  hahahaha.  Seriously, I’m changing the entire ending to keep the reader guessing until the very last word.  The first rule in making the mundane magical is to do the unexpected.

Happy writing.


Meandering Thoughts On Readability

Readability is a term which covers everything from font size to writing. Thanks to e-readers, font size is adjustable, leaving authors able to focus on their craft.

I have strong beliefs as to what makes a novel readable.

  • First, the reader should NEVER see the writer in the characters or story.
  • The language has to flow like breathing in a yoga class.
  • Lastly, the plot must unfold with seemingly no effort.  Then the reader becomes entrenched in the story and engaged with the characters.

It’s easy to let your opinions creep into a character’s thoughts or words, but those bits should be removed or reworked in the editing process. Don’t fall into the trap of thinking you need to make every paragraph work or keep every chapter.  Try removing parts and working key details into other scenes. Your story will be stronger for it.

Also avoid telling your reader the obvious, such as “she raised her hand up”, of course her hand went up, that’s the natural expected motion.  Only give a direction when it is something unexpected.  Same with “sat down in a chair”. I don’t know anyone who ever sat in any other fashion than “down”.

The breathing flow of the novel is more difficult to master.  There are two techniques I use to help with this process: distance and reading aloud.

Distancing yourself from your work helps you go into editor mode and study without attachment, gauging what needs work and what to cut.  Reading aloud will help you tweak your dialogue to a natural rhythm and weed out the tendency to make your characters speak the King’s English.  Really, no one talks like that… unless of course it is a carefully crafted character trait.

It’s a very deliberate process to make your writing read without feeling deliberate. Step into your character’s shoes, think with their thoughts as you write and let your readers see, feel, hear, smell and touch the action first hand. Cut the mundane and keep your pace moving forward.

And one last thing on the topic… flashbacks are not gratuitous character fill.  The scenes are building the story forward with information and insight the reader needs to be satisfied when they reach the last page.

Happy writing and keep plenty of coffee around for editing:)


Nearly Departed in Deadwood

“The first time I came to Deadwood, I got shot in the ass.”—Violet Parker

The best characters are quirky. The best stories are complicated. To make readers fall in love with both you need a healthy dose of character flaws and a unique voice.  Ann Charles accomplishes all this in the first novel of her Deadwood Series, “Nearly Departed in Deadwood”.  Early reviews compare her heroine, Violet Parker, to Janet Evanovich’s Stephanie Plum.  Violet and Stephanie would enjoy a glass of wine together, but really, the comparison stops there.

Ann Charles has created a wholly relatable character, full of despair and optimism, flaws and strengths.  Violet is a lot like us.

In earlier posts on writing, I’ve discussed deconstructing novels to understand how to write effectively. “Nearly Departed” is a well written example of how to build your characters and develop a page turner plot.

Here is Ann’s perspective on writing:

WRITING PROCESS

Overall, I’m what many writers call a “pantser” in the author world, which means I write by the seat of my pants. I get a couple of plot ideas in mind, put together a high-level plot paradigm with all of my subplots listed, work up a few necessary character goal details, wait for that opening line to hit me right between the eyes, and then explore the story as I go. Every time I finish a chapter, I pause to daydream and brainstorm what comes next. I have a general idea of the beginning, middle, and end, but I allow myself the liberty to change things along the way.

If we’re talking about my daily process for getting words on a page, my typical day is pretty normal. I work a full-time day job as a technical writer, so the morning starts out with dragging my butt out of bed around 6:00 a.m., checking email and Facebook/Twitter, and then getting the kids up and moving. My husband gets breakfast going while I get the munchkins dressed and ready for school/preschool. Then I head to work and play technical writer for eight hours, but my brain is constantly dabbling in fiction during long meetings and on “slow” days. I go home in the evening, hang out with the family until the kids go to bed around nine, and THEN I get to start working on writing. I usually stay up until around 1:00 a.m., then crash and start over again when the alarm goes off at 6:00 a.m. By Friday, I’m existing solely on caffeine and sugar and I look like an extra from a zombie flick, minus the craving for brains. Saturday morning, my husband keeps the kids busy so I can sleep in and return to looking somewhat human. The weekend nights are major writing time, too. Then Monday rolls around and I’m back to the weekday grind. Someday I hope I can drop the day job, but that’s far into the future at this point.

 HOW I KNEW I WANTED TO BE A WRITER

In my 20s, after reading romances for well over a decade, I decided that I wanted to try writing a romance of my own. So I did. I wrote it by hand and it was absolutely horrible. I’ll never share that one with anyone. But I sent the first 3 chapters of it off to a publisher, not realizing at the time how bad the story was, and Harlequin’s Mills and Boon division was very kind in their rejection letter. The editor encouraged me to keep trying. That was all the encouragement I needed, and I’ve been working on improving my craft and career ever since. 

ADVICE TO NEW WRITERS

If writing to get published and sell books is what you really want to do, realize that winning contests, finding a publisher (or agent), and becoming a bestseller doesn’t happen overnight. It takes years, sometimes even a decade or more, like it has for me. I have been working to be published for about fourteen years now. Many authors take less time than I have, some take more. Patience is necessary, as is continually learning, persevering, and practicing. And most important—this is an entrepreneurial business. Entrepreneurs are known for living, breathing, and sleeping their businesses. Writing is the same. If your family doesn’t periodically consider staging an intervention to break you from your writing-related addiction, you aren’t working hard enough at it to succeed.

Featured Best Seller for a Day SEPT 28, 2011

Nearly Departed in Deadwood by Ann Charles

Irony is having a big ol’ fiesta and Violet Parker is the piñata.  Little girls are vanishing from Deadwood, South Dakota, and Violet’s daughter could be next.  Short on time and long on worry, she’s desperate to find the monster behind the abductions.

But with her jerkoff co-worker trying to get her fired, a secret admirer sending creepy love poems, and a sexy-as-hell stranger hiding skeletons in his closet, Violet just might end up as one of Deadwood’s dearly departed.

Awards

  • WINNER of the 2010 Daphne du Maurier Award for Excellence in Mystery/Suspense
  • WINNER of the 2011 Romance Writers of America ® Golden Heart Award for Best Novel with Strong Romantic Elements!

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Let’s Talk About the Weather

August 26, 2011

 
The skies this morning were mostly clear, however, the air remains thick with tropical moisture. A hot wind scatters sun burned leaves. This is late summer in North Carolina. Two months of scant rain is forcing trees to drop shade while occasional “cool days”, as in under 90F, lets you imagine chilly football games and Halloween costumes. This is hurricane season.

Just days after a rare earthquake felt in tiny to moderate rumbles from Toronto to South Carolina, we’re bunkering down for Hurricane Irene. I’m fortunate to not be in the direct path; rather my neighborhood will experience stiff 50 mph winds and rain. That’s normal for an old-fashioned thunderstorm in this part of the country.

Now here is how it relates to writing. Hold on to your laptops….. your characters experience earthquakes and weather. Shocking, I know.

I’m a weather junkie. If disaster is falling from the sky, I’m glued to the Weather Channel and taking pictures. Freak 2-foot snowstorm? Documented. Standing in the eye of Hurricane Fran… got that too. Just think how powerful your hero’s scene would be if he/she crawled through a wind savaged parking lot, trying to rescue their loved one? How do I know they’re crawling? Have you tried to stand up when the wind speed is over 60 mph?

As writers, we can use our real life experiences during extreme conditions and situations to tighten the tension in our stories and add realism that draws in readers. Add details that involve the senses. How does the air feel on their skin? What color is the sky? After a hurricane, the sky is amazingly clear, and the tropic induced sunset is breathtaking. That’s the reward for surviving nature’s battering.

A snow storm plays a critical role in Perfect Copy, while the conclusion for my WIP, Anatomy of a Lie, is shaped by a hurricane. Take a moment to think of where in your story your characters could be helped or hampered by weather conditions. Have you described your character’s frustration, joy, the forces shaping his/her actions?

The eye of Hurricane Fran moved through central NC, right over my apartment. Power went out around 11pm as winds intensified. From my upstairs window, we watched green flashes silhouetting the bent trees as electrical transformers exploded. During the night, the steady howl calmed, drawing myself and neighbors outside to see the damage. Trees lay across cars, but it was too dark to make out much more. We were standing in the eye. Moments later the east side of the side began to pass over and dump over 16 inches of rain and $2.4 Billion in damage. I lived without electricity for a week, grateful for a gas stove and water heater:)

Rain, sleet or snow… weather facts have built-in drama.

Outer Bands of Hurricane Irene, Central NC


Left Brain Exercise: eBook Formatting

Digital Book World recently held a webinar roundtable about ebook formatting. The information shared was presented in a ready to implement manner, laying out what readers want and expect from ebooks and how to enhance their experience. (Remember, it’s all about the reader:) If you’re not familiar with this group, you should spend some time on their website. It’s crammed with industry trends and information for authors and publishers.

There are multiple approaches to formatting your novel for digital publishing, but its the reader you should keep in mind when laying out your cover, acknowledgments and the body of your novel. A straight translation from your print version to digital simply won’t make the cut. Formatting is a necessary, left-brained task.

A few weeks ago, Cameron Chapman wrote this great post on how to create the various ebook formats using Sigil and Calibre.

I’ve formatted by hand in MS Word, but I’m planning to give these programs a try with WIRED. I plan to add links to various Art Crime sites for readers interested in learning more, as well as giving some background on the artworks mentioned in the novel.

The Indie Book Collective offers monthly author webinars, including ebook formatting with live demonstrations. Learn more on their website, along with other useful tips on Indie publishing, or subscribe to their blog which updates often with insider tips and author advice.

If you know any links to other formatting tutorials or sites, send them this way. I’ll post and share.

Have a good week!


Menage A Blog: Day 4

Yesterday was such a whirlwind, I can hardly catch my breath to tell you about our final 3 authors engaged in their own Menage today. I know this is late notice, but there’s still time to comment and see who comes out on top for the final flirt Friday.

I’ll let you figure out the theme;)

Theresa Ragan “Finding Kate Huntley

Eden Baylee “Fall into Winter”

Jacquie Rogers “Much Ado About Marshals”  

Have a good night!


Menage A Blog-Day 2

The sun crossed the international date line and declared it officially day 2 in the flirt fest known as Menage A Blog. Yesterday, I strolled the tour trail and asked the name of my guardian angel, confessed I thought Bowie was hot in Labyrinth and brewed a cup of Tranquility tea to sip while reading.

What does Tuesday bring?

I can hardly wait.

Here’s your Day 2 Trio:

Lacey Weatherford “The Trouble With Spells”

Terri Giuliano Long “In Leah’s Wake” 

Rachel Thompson “Dollars & Sense“ 

Comment, collect new books and get entered for fun give aways. But don’t stray too long, my personal Menage is only a sunrise away.

If you get lost, the official tour guide will steer you to your next stop.

Have fun;)


Menage a Blog-Day 1

Menage a Blog is finally here and kicks off with three page-turning fantasy & paranormal novels by authors who are upcoming powerhouses in these genres.

The official tour headquarters has a complete list of authors and tour stops. Remember, your comment on each author’s site enters you into their site drawing for prizes as well as the Tour drawing for a new Kindle.

Here’s today’s line up:

Carolyn Mccray  “7 Folds of Winter” 

Amber Scott  “Soul Search” 

Deena Remiel  “Brethren Beginnings Vol. 1”

Have a great time blog hopping, but don’t forget to head back to WRITING AFTER DARK on Wednesday, my tour date,  and leave a comment. It gets you an entry into a drawing for a $50 Amazon Gift Card.

Happy reading;)


Menage a Blog

Comment July 20th for FREE ebook download & entry for prizes!

It’s not what you think. It’s way more fun than that:

Authors flirting shamelessly for comments.

Commenters ravenously downloading ebooks.

Breathless drawings for prizes.

I would stop there, but I’m drawn into the madness that is Menage a Blog. Each day, three authors will vie for your attention, awarding each commenter with a FREE download of their featured novel and a chance to win fun prizes. You’ll also be entered for the Blog Tour de Force drawing for a new Kindle.

Here’s a peek at the line up:

July 18th: Carolyn McMcray, Amber Scott, Deena Remiel

July 19th: Lacy Weatherford, Terri Giuliano Long, Rachel Thompson

July 20th: Judith Gaines, Regan Black, Jackie Chanel

July 21st: Theresa Ragan, Eden Baylee, Jacquie Rogers

July 22nd: Final Flirt with the top three tour authors

My tour date is Wednesday July 20th. Commenters receive a FREE DOWNLOAD of Smashwords Best Seller Perfect Copy and will be automatically entered for the Blog Tour de Force Kindle drawing and the WRITING AFTER DARK drawing for a $50 Amazon gift card. By the way, $50 could really load up a new Kindle with lots of great reads for the dog days of summer.

To get your daily Menage a Blog reminder with links & extra Kindle entries, sign up for the official newsletter!

Thanks to our Sponsors who make this all possible, the Indie Book Collective for the incredible resources they provide indie authors and to the Tour Back Stage Crew that has worked tirelessly getting us authors whipped into tour shape.

Don’t worry, I’ll be back on Monday to remind you of the tour stop with links and reviews. These are books you won’t want to miss.


WIRED | The Poll

Here’s your chance to help decide the direction for the cover of my new novel WIRED.

Read an excerpt.


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